Post by kwdrewfan on Jul 5, 2015 10:51:56 GMT -5
Surprise! I'm writing my own Endurance series from scratch! 
Because I am a bit of a novelist, my version sort of jumps in and out of a third person narrative to an actual script format, so I hope that it isn't too confusing to follow. Here's a short example from the Right to Stay mission: (I've replaced all of the character names with placeholders)
JD: “Alright, it’s already been 5 minutes and everyone is looking good. You guys are tough.”
Michael grits his teeth in pain but holds on for dear life, while Lucas is surprisingly looking the most at ease. Randy glances around at his competition, trying to size up who will be the most likely to let go, when Kyle catches his eye.
Kyle: “Hey, Randy. How are you doing?”
Randy grins, a bit sheepishly from being caught: “Good, how are you?”
Kyle: “Great! Never better. Thanks for asking.”
Suddenly, from the other end of the row of boys…
SPLASH!
One boy hits the water in a flash.
JD: “Oh, that’s it! Landon is out of the game. Only two left.”
Girls: “Good job, Landon!” (some clap for him)
Does this sound okay to everybody? I have 4 & a half episodes written, but I wanted to make sure that people would be interested before going any further!
And importantly, if y'all ARE interested - if anyone would like to give me suggestions/help come up with ideas for challenges, I would love to discuss it through PMing! Creating challenges is definitely the hardest part for me, so I could use all the help I can get
Because I am a bit of a novelist, my version sort of jumps in and out of a third person narrative to an actual script format, so I hope that it isn't too confusing to follow. Here's a short example from the Right to Stay mission: (I've replaced all of the character names with placeholders)JD: “Alright, it’s already been 5 minutes and everyone is looking good. You guys are tough.”
Michael grits his teeth in pain but holds on for dear life, while Lucas is surprisingly looking the most at ease. Randy glances around at his competition, trying to size up who will be the most likely to let go, when Kyle catches his eye.
Kyle: “Hey, Randy. How are you doing?”
Randy grins, a bit sheepishly from being caught: “Good, how are you?”
Kyle: “Great! Never better. Thanks for asking.”
Suddenly, from the other end of the row of boys…
SPLASH!
One boy hits the water in a flash.
JD: “Oh, that’s it! Landon is out of the game. Only two left.”
Girls: “Good job, Landon!” (some clap for him)
Does this sound okay to everybody? I have 4 & a half episodes written, but I wanted to make sure that people would be interested before going any further!
And importantly, if y'all ARE interested - if anyone would like to give me suggestions/help come up with ideas for challenges, I would love to discuss it through PMing! Creating challenges is definitely the hardest part for me, so I could use all the help I can get
no word on its release date yet though haha
Unfortunately I'm not sure when I'll be posting it, simply because I know that if I don't have most of it written by the time I start posting, I'm going to get lazy and not want to finish haha. But I hope to at least have the first episode up by September!
