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Post by Mister Ham on Aug 8, 2009 17:06:51 GMT -5
Updated! The ending sucked! XD
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Post by baritonehero! on Aug 8, 2009 21:26:06 GMT -5
some advice. try and make the conversations flow and no so stiff. like it needs more emotion
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Post by Mister Ham on Aug 9, 2009 15:02:31 GMT -5
Thanks Matt!
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Post by baritonehero! on Aug 13, 2009 15:33:50 GMT -5
yo welcome now write another one! i need ben back!
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Post by Mister Ham on Aug 13, 2009 15:57:13 GMT -5
Y? He aint comin back with that attitude. XD
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Post by baritonehero! on Aug 13, 2009 19:56:00 GMT -5
huh? what atitude?
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Post by Mister Ham on Aug 14, 2009 7:06:14 GMT -5
Idk. lol. Next episode will be up shortly.
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Post by sWeeTAs on Aug 14, 2009 20:05:52 GMT -5
Yeah!
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Post by baritonehero! on Aug 20, 2009 2:51:40 GMT -5
what happened to shortly?!?!? its been 6 days!
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Post by Mister Ham on Aug 20, 2009 19:11:26 GMT -5
Ive been busy  XD |
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Post by Mister Ham on Aug 22, 2009 9:04:54 GMT -5
Last Time on Endurance New Zealand!
JD: The pink team won the mission!
Wendy: Yes!!
JD: Going against their allies they sent Yellow up to temple.
Brown emerged vicotious, making yellow the 2nd team eliminated.
Who will get sent home in another temple mission?
This is Endurance New Zealand!
*Endurance Theme*
The Next Morning...
Veronica: I'm shocked I came back.
Xavier: Well I'm just happy.
Veronica: Haha thanks X-Man.
Veronica Conf: It feels so amazing to be back. Other than the fact that we have a couple targets on our back...
JD: Hey guys. Anyone home?
Steve: Yeah. Sorry we didn't hear ya.
Alek: Good morning JD!
JD: Good morning. So as you know Brown came back last night, but yellow did not.
So Veronica you beat them, so you can read the letter!
Veronica: Haha ok. Dear everyone but Red and Pink. We had an awesome time here and who knows what would've happenned if we stayed longer. But no worries, were not crying. First, Green and Purple. Being Pinks "dogs" are hurting you. Now Blue, the only people we trust, please take care of our Teamwork piece for us.
Danielle: Wow! I didn't expect that!
JD: So heres the piece pole!
Red- Xavier and Eliza- Leadership and Commitment
Orange- Wayne and Zoe- Perserverance
Green- Leah and Max- Strength
Blue- Alek and Danielle- Friendship and Teamwork
Purple- Steve and Mallory- Trust
Gray- Troy and Lena- Karma
Brown- Ben and Veronica- Heart
Pink- Tyler and Wendy- Discipline and Courage
Leah Conf: Having 1 piece sucks. I mean it's better than 0, but I don't like the idea of it.
JD: Today is another temple mission!
Wayne: What!?!
JD: You heard me right! Meet me it the mission field in an hour!
Zoe Conf: Being a last place team might put me on the chart for the temple. Being weak might show that I'm undeserving.
Max Conf: I'd really like to win today. I might even send one of my alliences, because us, purple, and pink are the strongest!
AT THE MISSION...
JD: Ready for your temple mission?
Tyler: Not really...
JD: Well too bad! Heres the scoop.
Your mission is called famous faces.
As you see there are plates, and one has your face on it.
You all will have a nerf gun and a box full of nerf bullets.
Once your plate has 3 bullets sticking to it, your out.
Now what makes this difficult, is the plates move in a continuous circle.
Lets get ready. On your mark get set go!
Eliza: This is harder than it looks!
*Max gets hit*
*Veronica gets hit*
*Wayne gets hit*
Veronica: Wendy I didn't do anything to you!
*Wendy gets hit*
*Veronica gets hit again*
*Troy gets hit*
Troy: LENA!!!
Lena: Haha sorry!
*Wendy shoots at Veronica and misses*
*Tyler gets hit*
*Ben gets hit*
JD: Wow you guys are going fast!
*Zoe gets hit*
*Wayne gets hit*
*Wendy gets hit*
JD: Veronica and Wendy need one more to be out!
Tyler: Take this!
*Veronica gets hit*
Veronica: What!
JD: Come here Veronica. Your out.
Veronica: Zoe get Pink! Please!
Tyler: Your out! Just be quiet!
*Tyler Gets hit*
*Zoe gets hit*
Wayne: Zoe don't listen to Veronica! Your becoming a target!
*Lena is hit*
Lena: Sorry Blue but your doing good!
*Lena misses Danielle*
*Troy gets hit*
JD: Tyler, Wendy, Zoe, and Troy need one more and theyre out!
Troy: Why are you people hitting me?
Wendy: Cuz your complaining!
*Troy gets hit*
*Wendy gets hit*
JD: Troy and Wendy your out!
Troy: Dannnng
Wendy: Aghh
Wayne: I love Nerf Guns!
Alek: I'm sorry Lena but you went after my partner.
*Lena gets hit*
Ughh later
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Post by baritonehero! on Aug 22, 2009 12:57:38 GMT -5
ugh! come on brown! you got this! whens ben coming back?!?! im waiting patiently this time
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Post by Mister Ham on Aug 29, 2009 6:19:06 GMT -5
Ugh! I was writing and it deleted itself!!
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Post by Mister Ham on Aug 29, 2009 6:19:39 GMT -5
I will just show the end of the mission.
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Post by Mister Ham on Aug 29, 2009 6:22:31 GMT -5
JD: Well for some reasons the camera stopped working, but heres the standings.
0 Hits
1 Hit
Mallory, Eliza, and Leah.
2 Hits
Xavier, Danielle, and Max.
Max: Leah get Red!
Xavier: Eliza, just get Max! Then it'll be more even!
*Xavier gets hit*
Eliza: Noo Xavier!
Danielle: Mallory! Please don't go after me!
Mallory: Ughh this is so hard!
Steve: Mallory! You talk!?!?!
Mallory: I also sing! Lalalala!!
JD: This game is going on forever!
Eliza: Because its so hard!
*Eliza gets hit*
Xavier: Eliza get Max!
Max: No Eliza!
*Leah gets hit*
Leah: Mallory!
Mallory: Oh my gosh! Please stop yelling! Its to hard for me!
Leah: Well! We do have a deal!
Max: Leah!! Not during the challenge!!
JD: Wow things are spilling here!
*Max gets hit*
Xavier: Was that even you Eliza?
JD: It was Danielle!
Danielle: JD! Don't tell!!
Max: Leah, stop chasing Red. Go after Purple and Blue!
Veronica Conf: That challenge was intense. Alliences were revealed.
Steve: Mallory! Get Leah!
*Mallory gets hit*
*Leah gets hit*
JD: Leah, take a seat.
Leah Conf: That mission was terrible. We would've won! Purple is so ugh!!
JD: The 3 girls left, Mallory, Eliza, and Danielle are left. They all need one bullet!
*One of Elizas bullets fall off her plate*
JD: Wow! Eliza needs 2 bullets now!
Xavier: Go Eliza!
Eliza: Woot Woot!
Alek: Danielle! Even it up! Get Eliza! you too Mallory!
Mallory: I'm not doing your dirty work!
*Danielle gets hit*
Veronica: Come on Eliza!
Mallory: Eliza, I'll try to hit my own.
Steve: Mallory! No! We'll get!
*Mallory gets hit*
JD: Thats it!
(Eliza, Xavier, and Veronica Hug)
JD: Congrats Red! I will meet you for your decision in 2 hours!
At the Huts...
Eliza: We won!
Xavier: I'm shocked! We mightve been thought out to be a weak team!!
Veronica: Nice job guys!
(Zoe walks in)
Zoe: Hey guys, should I be nervous for tonight?
(Red Team looks at eachother)
Both: Nahh
Zoe: Thank you guys!
In the boys huts...
Wayne: Zoe what'd they say?
Zoe: That we shouldn't be.
(Wayne hugs Zoe)
Zoe: What was that for?
Wayne: Your a great partner. Sorry I ever doubeted you.
Zoe: Wayne! Thats so sweet!
(Steve and Mallory walk to the creek)
Mallory: I'm so happy Red won.
Steve: I'm not.
Mallory: Why not?!?
Steve: Were going to get sent. I know it.
Mallory: I gave her the win tho!
Steve: Then talk to her. Tell her we wouldn't send her.
Mallory: Steve, your lying. I see it.
Steve: What do we say then! We'll send you! Seriously!
Mallory: Then we don't have to lie. Say we have eachother backs. Right not Green and Pink don't matter.
Steve: Whatever. This isn't my call.
(Eliza walks over)
Eliza: Is everything okay?
Mallory: Just confused.
Steve: Really confused.
Eliza: Hmmh
Mallory: Well we have your backs.
Eliza: Your not lying are you?
Steve: Not anymore. Send Green and Pink, it's fine with us.
Eliza: Wow. Well Pinks going for sure. I know that.
Mallory: Okay. Fine with me.
Eliza: I have to go talk to some other teams. I'm still not sure.
Steve: Bye and Good Luck.
Later...
Xavier: Max can I talk to you?
Max: Sure...
Xavier:Would you send us to temple? Or samahdi us? Or anything like that?
Max: Depending on the situation. Right now if I were you I'd send Purple and Pink.
Xavier: Thats what Purple said about you!
Max: Liers! Theyre playing us!
Xavier: You are too!
Max: Well I have an excuse! Theyre strong!
Xavier: Promise not to hurt our team?
Max: Promise.
Max Conf: Reds so easy! Like taking candy from a baby!
JD: Hey ready for the decision?
Eliza: Very.
JD: Who did you choose?
Xavier: After a lot of thinking, first we chose to send PINK because of the way they treated Brown.
JD: Ok, Pink and....
Eliza: We chose this team because theyre strong.
Blue.
Alek: What!
(Everyone looks surprised)
JD: Seems like no one expected that!
Danielle: Not at all!
(Green hugs and Purple hugs)
JD: Well you two teams will take the long walk up to the temple, at dusk. See you there.
When the teams are leaving....
Tyler: Bye Max.
Max: Best of luck dude.
Troy: Please come back. We need you.
Alek: Will try.
Tyler Conf: I want to come back and prove I still want this game.
Wendy Conf: I really want to come back. I havent showed Brown all I got.
Alek Conf: I want to come back badly. Gray needs us. We need them. Its that simple.
Danielle Conf: Coming back would be great. But seeing Red get out is even better. (Cries)
Up at the Temple...
JD: Welcome your first time Pink and Blue. Pink on the left and Blue on the right.
Danielle: Alek I'm really nervous.
Alek: I am too. We both are.
JD: Ready? Put down your elements.
Tyler: Wendy what do you think?
Wendy: Not a clue...
Alek: Fire.
Danielle: No...
Alek: Fire.
Danielle: Noo!
JD: May the dominant elements please rise now.
Pink: Water
Blue: Fire
Danielle: Nooo! Alek!
JD: Thats one round for you Pink. One more and your going back!
Tyler: What this time?
Wendy: Don't put it all on me! Water? Or wood?
Danielle: No more fire! Thats why I'm not a pyro!
Alek: That has nothing to do with it!!!
JD: Lets see those elements!
Pink: Fire
Blue: Water
Danielle: Told you!
JD: Whoever gets this round will win this Temple! Lets see this!
Alek: Aghh this is so intense!
Wendy: Please, please, help us through this.
JD: Here are the elements!
Pink: Water
Blue: Wood
Danielle: Oh my goodness! Alek!
(Blue hugs)
Wendy: Oh my, Tyler!
(Wendy starts crying and Tyler tries to comfort her)
JD: Congrats Blue! Pink, you played a great game and tried your hardest. Nothing to be ashamed of.
Tyler: Thanks...
(Pink Dissapears behind fire)
JD: Blue, your reward is simple. Go back to the huts!
At the huts..
Alek: Guess who!
Everyone: YES!!!
(Troy and Alek hug)
Troy Conf: I'm so relieved Blue won. We are just so happy!
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Post by sWeeTAs on Aug 29, 2009 23:47:30 GMT -5
lol being busy sucks huh!
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