Lyoko's-Princess007
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*I solemnly swear that I am up to no good ;)* ~Endurance High Sierras is the BEST!!~ :)
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Post by Lyoko's-Princess007 on Apr 25, 2010 10:57:57 GMT -5
Hello everyone!
I am new to this site and I wanted to ask all you endurance high sierras fans for some help.
I belong to a site called fanfiction.net and I am really wanting to write a Endurance High Sierras fanfic. But I am wanting some help to get started. Like some ideas for the plot line, twists and turns just some ideas and such to get the creative wheels in my head turning.
So if anyone has an ideas or anything please let me know, it would mean a lot.
Thanks for your time. 
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Post by Mister Ham on Apr 25, 2010 11:04:51 GMT -5
There should be a Brown Team this season  |
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Post by Cruise meerkat Youssy on Apr 25, 2010 12:40:07 GMT -5
fanfiction.net rawks, I have a story about Endurance, except it's with meerkats and its really badly written XD
Anyway, I say definitely keep the team switch, and agreed with Mitch, make a brown team. A lot of people on High Sierras didn't get much of an edit (Kristine, Aric, Cameron, etc.) so maybe give them more personality? Hmm...Anymore help you want, just ask me!
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Post by Mister Ham on Apr 25, 2010 13:18:34 GMT -5
I agree with the edit! I think Alex and Ike needed more personality as well.
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Lyoko's-Princess007
Just-Off the Boat
*I solemnly swear that I am up to no good ;)* ~Endurance High Sierras is the BEST!!~ :)
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Post by Lyoko's-Princess007 on Apr 25, 2010 15:09:21 GMT -5
Alrighty, I will have a brown team, that's a good idea. Should I maybe make it the team that got eliminated from becoming official endurance players because they didn't get a color? (their names escape me at the moment) Or should I just create OCs??  I wasn't a huge fan of Ike he came off as a macho jerk (no offense to anyone that likes him that's just what I thought) but I liked ALex a lot but he was kind of a robot so I will have to change that for sure. Anyone have any ideas for a plot line of any sort? I can't seem to think of much. Thank you to all that are willing to help, means a lot to me! |
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Post by Pgcool™ on Apr 25, 2010 16:29:53 GMT -5
You should bring back 2 people from past season to be the brown team!
Like Max(E2) and Erika(E4)
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Lyoko's-Princess007
Just-Off the Boat
*I solemnly swear that I am up to no good ;)* ~Endurance High Sierras is the BEST!!~ :)
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Post by Lyoko's-Princess007 on Apr 25, 2010 17:30:16 GMT -5
Well actually the story is going to take place during Endurance High Sierras so I was thinking that the team that got eliminated during the color challenge to become official endurance players could come back, But nothing is set in stone for this story yet everything is still up in the air so any ideas are welcome! Any plot line ideas? anybody? |
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Post by Mister Ham on Apr 25, 2010 17:56:42 GMT -5
Hmm what exactly is a plot line? Can I have an example?
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Post by endurancefan on Apr 25, 2010 19:22:36 GMT -5
I have an idea! If brown team comes back, there should be some drama with Garett/Cealey/Dakota, cause you know Garett liked Cealey, but obviously she and Dakota had a thing. I dunno, that could just make for some good drama.
And definitely give some of the characters more...character. Haha.
I'm actually really excited for this, cause that's one of my favorite seasons.
Have some exciting twists, like maybe teams will go up to temple but NONE will go home or something crazy like that.
Have it kind of go along the same lines as the actual season.
Are you keeping the same teams or changing them up?
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Post by Cruise meerkat Youssy on Apr 25, 2010 19:28:05 GMT -5
Mitch, plot lines are what happens in a story/show/play, etc. Like the plot. Usually in TV shows (or, in this case, a story based off a TV show) they have a lot of plot lines over a season (or entire story).
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Lyoko's-Princess007
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*I solemnly swear that I am up to no good ;)* ~Endurance High Sierras is the BEST!!~ :)
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Post by Lyoko's-Princess007 on Apr 25, 2010 21:25:55 GMT -5
EnduranceFan, I really like that idea of a Garrett Dakota and Cealey drama going on. I could do a lot of interesting things with that. I personally didn't like Cealey I though she was kinda a bee with an itch, I always wanted Dakota wanted to end up with Kelsey. But all of them thrown together in a love triangle would be very intriguing. I am going to give the characters more personality and more character for sure. High Sierras was by far my favorite Endurance season of all time. I just didn't think the other seasons didn't meet the level of awesomeness that High Sierras had. Don't get me wrong I still like the other seasons but High Sierras was just my favorite. I was thinking of maybe turning it into a sort of camp like thing. I mean there would still be challenges and people would still go home but the challenges and stuff would just be more spread out so people could really get to know eachother and you could really expand on things ya know? I am going to keep it along similar lines as the regular season but I might change a few things...like how it ended for example....  I am not quite sure about the teams yet, i was thinking of maybe changing one or two. Any input??? I was also thinking of maybe inserting my own OC into it. yes or no? So who would you guys like to be a couple with who??? You guys are awesome by the way! ;D |
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Post by endurancefan on Apr 25, 2010 23:39:26 GMT -5
Thanks!! Yeah, I kind of thought Dakota and Kelsey would be cute together, too. You could even throw that in, as well. (I didn't like Cealey much, either.) I think that love interests were shown okay on Endurance, but editing didn't really let you see them THAT much, you know? So I really like your thought of making it more like camp and expanding it, cause then you could have us really see how the characters get to know each other. So I think you should definitely do that!!
I think it'd be a good idea to change up a few of the teams if you want, cause that might make it more fresh, but at the same time, it might be easier to follow if they're the same teams...I dunno. Haha.
And putting into another character might work out really cool!
And let's see...couples...
Dakota with Kelsey or Cealey
Alex or Cameron with Kristine
Connor with Darci
And aww thanks! You're awesome too! Haha.
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Post by Mister Ham on Apr 26, 2010 5:52:15 GMT -5
Mitch, plot lines are what happens in a story/show/play, etc. Like the plot. Usually in TV shows (or, in this case, a story based off a TV show) they have a lot of plot lines over a season (or entire story). Thanks Bryan. I know like what plot is but i dont know what in Endurance one is like. I probably sound like a babbling idiot  |
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Post by endurancefan on Apr 26, 2010 17:11:29 GMT -5
Haha no you don't. The plot in Endurance would probably just be like how certain teams make it all the way to the end. Since it's a reality show, it doesn't really have a specific "plot" per say, but because this will be a fanfiction, there can be. Like, harrypotterfanatic could make certain teams go home certain times and they could also have certain twists occurs...I don't know, it's hard to explain. Haha.
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Lyoko's-Princess007
Just-Off the Boat
*I solemnly swear that I am up to no good ;)* ~Endurance High Sierras is the BEST!!~ :)
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Post by Lyoko's-Princess007 on Apr 26, 2010 18:47:16 GMT -5
Hello everyone! ;D lol Anyways I am probably going to have Dakota end up with Kelsey in the end but to make things interesting I might mess around with that a little bit and keep things interesting by throwing Celeay into the mix. I am planning to make it into sort of a camp so the things that the editing cut out like love interests, friendships and what the personalities of all the players were really like. etc. So that's a keeper for sure. So besides it being a camp what else do you think i could throw in there? Any ideas? Hm...the teams are a tough one but I will probably keep some and change some. I was thinking of bringing back a few people that I really liked from other seasons but I'm not sure how it would work out and I would like your guy's opinon on it. I was thinking of bringing back Tom (Hawaii) John (Tehachapi) Daniela (Tehachapi) Mike(Tehachapi) So I would love to hear what you all think about that. For couples I am for sure going to do Dakota/Cealey/Kelsey triangle I was thinking maybe Max and Kirstine? I always thought they'd be cute together. Connor with Darci for sure! So please everyone make your voices heard about what couples you'd like to see, and twists and turns etc. I am open to ANY ideas you guys want to throw out. Mitch, You don't sound like a babbling idiot. Even if you don't know much about story writing don't let that stop you from throwing ideas at me! (not literally though that would hurt! haha jk) Just look at it this way, if someone is writing a story about Endurance High Sierras what would you want to see in it, who would you want to be a couple? things like that. Awww Shucks! You're awesomer! bahahaha ;D |
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Post by Cruise meerkat Youssy on Apr 26, 2010 20:48:31 GMT -5
Well, I am pretty awesome, if I say so myself (; Haha, I'm jking ;D Yall are awesome too ^^ Oh! I had a good idea! Maybe change some of the alliances a little bit? And also, is garret going to be involved in the Cealey/Kelsey/Dakota thing, cause he's like obsessed with her? BTW Great idea for a camp!! Also...for the people you're bringing back, you have 3 guys and 1 girl  Also, I think maybe bring one person from each season before (so, not including Fiji?). Or, like, choose only 2 of those if you're looking for less than 4. The reason I'm trying to make more diverse seasons is so that no one will have premade alliances, or be able to have a huge advantage over the other teams because they knew each other already. Also, I'd rather see Kylie over Mike for Tehachapi, she didn't really get much of an edit except as being the victim of a partner no one liked. Just throwing random ideas out! |
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Also, I think maybe bring one person from each season before (so, not including Fiji?). Or, like, choose only 2 of those if you're looking for less than 4. The reason I'm trying to make more diverse seasons is so that no one will have premade alliances, or be able to have a huge advantage over the other teams because they knew each other already. Also, I'd rather see Kylie over Mike for Tehachapi, she didn't really get much of an edit except as being the victim of a partner no one liked. Just throwing random ideas out!